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 | Subject: My Cloverfield FanFic Tue Sep 02, 2008 1:49 pm | |
| Cloverfield: the Time of their Lives | Quote: | Chapter 1: "It's going to be a good day"
10:15 AM on May 22, 2009
It’s 10:15 AM, and its going to be a good day said Alex, as he and his classmates were on a train to Grand Central for the Memorial Day Weekend trip to New York City, As Alex looks around, he notices his friend Jeremy with his hand held video camera, Alex says to Jeremy “What are you doing with my camera?” Jeremy replied “Your sister gave it to me before we left your house.” Alex replied “She’s always giving away my stuff away.” Then Alex noticed that his girlfriend of 2 years Julie wasn’t in her seat, He asks his friend Phil who was in the seat across the aisle “Hey Phil, did you see Julie?” and Phil replied “Yeah, she went to the back”, Alex said “She could have at least told me.” Then their Teacher Ms Combs stood up and said “Students We’ll be in Grand Central in a couple of minutes, So get your stuff ready” and then Julie shouts out “HEY ALEX!” and Alex replies “What happened with you, Where did you go ?” Julie replies ‘I went to talk with my friends” Alex replied “Your friends don’t like me for some reason?” Julie replies back “Their just jealous of us”... Then the Train pulls in to Grand Central Station, ending their trip. Alex says “Well, Here we go...”
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Chapter 2: "It's going to be a long night"
Plot: Alex & his classmates go to a Restaurant before going to Time Square.
“Class settle down, we’ll be at the Restaurant any minute now, so hold on” announced Ms. Combs. “Finally, I was getting hungry” replied Alex. “Hey Alex, do you think are we going to Time Square after this?” asked Julie, “Yeah, we are, Ms Combs said we were going to.” then one of Alex’s friends Nick replied “Time Square is so great at night, all the lights are so blinding, I can’t wait!” Alex replied “Yeah, I know. I remember the first I went there...” and then the Bus finally stops and Ms. Combs announces “We’re here, Please leave your stuff here on the bus, and we’ll be back later.” As Alex enters the Restaurant, he notices his old girlfriend Jenny, who he dated before he meets Julie. Jenny & Alex were still best friends but its been awkward between them since Alex started dating Julie. Alex was getting nervous because he didn’t know that Jenny was coming on their trip. Alex’s friend Rodney told him “You shouldn’t worry about her, are you guys still friends?” Alex replied “Yeah, we are but it’s been so awkward between us, I don’t even know what to do” Rodney replied “Hang out more, I don’t even know any split couples that even are friends, you two are unique” Alex replied “It’s kind of hard to do that” then Julie says “C’mon guys lets find a table to sit at” Alex and his friends followed her to a table near a booth playing music. “Here’s a perfect spot!” said Julie. Alex says “I’m getting tired, I can’t wait to get to the hotel” and Jeremy replies “Me too, my feet are killing me.” Alex replies “Why are you still filming this?” Jeremy replied “I need something to put up on Youtube.” Alex replies “But it’s my camera, Anyway I’m hungry, where’s the waiter?” Nick replied “it’s an all you can eat buffet type of restaurant, Alex” Alex replied “Oh, Well that explains everything, let’s go get some food” As Alex stood up from his seat; Jenny passed him by and said “Hey Alex.” Alex’s heart was beginning to beat fast; Alex said “It’s going to be a long night”
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| Quote: | Chapter 3: "Should have stayed home"
Synopsis: The Class finally arrives at the Hotel..
11:45 PM on May 22, 2009
“Ah, We’re finally here, I can’t wait” said Nick. “As a pre-caution, we will need your cell phones and other communication devices” announced Ms Combs. “Why” asked Jenny’s friend Kayla. “So none of you kids can call anyone during the night” replied Ms Combs. “But Ms Combs, I need to have my phone with me at all times” replied Alex. “Why Alex, is it important?” asked Ms Combs. “Yes it is, My Parents worry about me, I need the phone with me at all times” replied Alex. “He’s such a little liar Ms Combs, Don’t believe him” said Nadine, who has disliked Alex since the 9th grade. “Yeah, he lies a lot” said Jimmy, who always hangs out with Nadine. “Oh you two should Shut up, you’re only saying that because you don’t like him” replied Jenny. “Jenny, you don’t have to defend me” replied Alex. “Cut out the fighting kids, Anyway Alex I believe you, Keep your phone for now, I’ll take it from you tomorrow” said Ms Combs. “Thank Ms Combs, Ok, let’s go find our room guys.” replied Alex. As Alex and his friends went up to 4th floor to find their rooms, Jeremy notices that Alex’s cousin Anthony was on the trip with them “Hey Alex, isn’t that your cousin Anthony over there?” and Alex replied “Yeah, it is.” Jeremy replied “I didn’t know he was coming on the trip.” Alex said “How are you noticing this now? He was on the same bus as us.” Jeremy replied “Oh wow, I never noticed him” and then Rodney yelled out “Hey Guys! I found our room, it’s over here.” As Alex entered the room, He says “Wow, what a big room, it’s even got a view of Lower Manhattan!” Phil then says “I can see the Woolworth building from here, its close from here.” And then Alex notices its getting late and asks “What time is it?” and Jeremy replies “It’s 12: 42 am.” Rodney replied we should get some sleep. We have a long day tomorrow.” Alex replied “Yeah, he’s a got a point, I’m going to wash up and then go to sleep.” As Alex walked into the Bathroom, the Hotel began to shake violently. “Holy Shit, what was that?” said Alex. “It was a earthquake” said Jeremy “A earthquake in the middle of NYC, that’s never happened before” replied Phil. “Hey everyone, did you guys feel that?” yells Alex across the hall. “Was that another Terrorist attack?” asked Alex’s cousin Anthony. “I don’t know what that was” replied Alex. “Hey everyone, There’s something on the TV, Get in here!” yelled out Nick. “Shut up everyone!” yelled Alex, “But now, just approximately 15 minutes after a possible earthquake in Lower Manhattan, nearby in New York harbor, we’re getting word of an oil tanker capsizing in the middle of the harbor near the Statue of Liberty” said a Female News Reporter. “Wow, the Statue of Liberty, that’s pretty close” said Jeremy as he was taping the whole event. “You know what we should do, lets go to lounge across the hall to see what’s happening” said Alex. “That seems like a good idea” replied Rodney. As they walked down the hall and entered the Lounge and walked toward the window, Jeremy told Alex “I knew I should of have stayed home” then out of nowhere, a huge explosion was heard, felted and seen. Alex yells out “RUN!” ---- Chapter 4: 'What can possibly go wrong ?"
Synopsis: The Class sees something that they have never seen before
1:15 AM on May 23, 2009
If the Earthquake didn’t waken anyone up, the explosion sure did, Alex and everyone in the hotel ran outside, the buildings nearby the Hotel were severally damaged and even the Hotel had damage to it. “What’s happening?” was the most asked question of the night. “Is everyone ok?” asked Phil, then Alex noticed that Julie wasn’t right by him, he yells out “Did anyone see Julie, Where’s Julie, She’s not here.” They could hardly stay in one place, since there were huge crowds of people running toward them, “Alex, Alex, Alex, I’m over here!!” yelled out Julie. “Oh, thank god, I was getting worried” replied Alex. Then a huge ROAR was heard, and then it seem like something was hurled. “Holy shit, what did we just see and hear?” asked Rodney “What makes a sound like that, I couldn’t see what was being hurled” said Julie. Then out of nowhere a huge amphibian type of creature walked in front of the crowd of the scared New Yorkers, “Holy Shit, run, just run” yelled out Alex. As fast as the creature appeared, it was gone. The creature went on to walk in to the Woolworth Building causing it to collapse. Alex and the rest ran into the nearby building. Alex, who was out of breathe asked “What was that thing?” Julie replied “I don’t know, do you think it’s safe to go out?” Alex said ‘I think so, let’s go out and check it out” as Alex went outside to check out everything “Guy’s, its ok!” then Jeremy noticed that Ms Combs was still there, “Ms Combs, are you ok?” Ms Combs replies “Yes, I am and I don’t want to talk about it.” Then Jeremy asked “What are we going to do now?” Alex replies “We escape.” Julies asks “Where?” Phil said ‘We should head to the tunnels.” Then Alex replied “No. lets escape through the Brooklyn Bridge, that’s not far away, what can possibly go wrong?” Ms Combs replied “That’s a good idea, Alex.” Then Alex and the rest of the classmates walked all the way to the Brooklyn Bridge, and then Jeremy accidentally tripped on another guy’s foot, that guy also had a video camera on him. The guy apologized to Jeremy saying “I’m so sorry, kid” Jeremy replied “Sorry, it was my fault.” Then that guy’s friend yelled out “Hud, hurry up we’re behind the rest.” Then Alex and his classmates finally had arrived to the Brooklyn Bridge, Jeremy said “Holy shit, what happened to the Statue of Liberty’s head?” People were in shock of the sight of the decapitated Statue of Liberty, Alex then notices the people on the lower level running away. “Why are they running?” then a huge tail came out of nowhere to strike the bridge, causing it to collapse. Alex began to run; he noticed that Julie wasn’t in his sight. Alex hears her voice “Alex, Alex, help me, I fell down” but it was to late for Alex. Julie was dragged down with the bridge. Alex yelled out “JULIE!! NO!!”
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